At first this feels like going to the Humane Society to pick out a puppy... E.g., one young woman described herself as "honest, intelligent, with a heart of gold." Her rap sheet says that she's serving 25 years for homicide.(She was a waitress, so maybe a rude customer didn't leave her a tip. ) I've read hundreds of personal ads from incarcerated women.Write out a conversation about yourself that fascinates this person. If you can't imagine a meaningful response, take out the sentence. I then added "with junk cars in the yard." Run your ad through your word processor's spelling checker.Now condense your responses into two or three sentences. Then run it through a grammar checker (in Microsoft Word, the grammar checker is under "Tools").Not one mentioned her crime, or anything about prison.The women instead describe themselves as enjoying long walks on the beach, romantic evenings by the fireplace, etc.Buyers and sellers know at a glance that you're trustworthy.If they want to be sure, they can read each comment written about you.
Then you could skip the ads and go straight to the reviews.The result was 60 e-mails and "lots of" dates with interesting women. On e Bay, buyers and sellers leave each other positive, neutral, or negative feedbacks.